User talk:Goblin lair/The Battle at Bruma

need tip/help

I need a tip about how to make my text look more... well so it looks better and are easier to read. -Goblin lair 18:23, 17 August 2008

Want advice? For people's dialogue, use Italic text instead of Bold text. (of course this is mostly a matter of personal preferance) And it's Jauffre, and not "Jeuffrey".

Maybe you could use these headers for diffirent chapters:

Chapter ...

insead of a full line.

Also, you've written "capter" and not Chapter at "Capter 2."

Just noting all these mistakes here, as other editors may not edit other people's user pages without permission from the user. These are all suggestions, so feel free to ignore them if you wish ;) -- LordDagon 07:30, 22 August 2008 (EDT)

Thanks! I have made the "necessary" changes. It is kind of good to know how to spell names. :)

I kind of like the Bold text so I kept it.

By the way... what do you think of the story so far? I mean, it's not done just yet but you still can have thoughts about it. So what do you think? -Goblin lair 22:43, 23 August 2008

You are completely free to use bold or italic text, of course, so if you like the bold feel free to keep it. Your choice. :) The story is getting pretty good, keep up the good work! --LordDagon 07:39, 24 August 2008 (EDT)

thanks, again. :) I shall work on with my storys, I think they will become relly good in the end. -Goblin lair 07:27, 25 August 2008 (EDT)

Everyone come! I am starting to plan the next part of the story! Do you have a character that you want to add to the story, tell me.

Ok. I am starting to write on the next story and I would be very happy if I could get any of your characters in each city. If you want your character in the story. add some facts about the character: his/her class/work, body (for example: long, fat, skinny and so on), age and favourite weapon. also a bit about the characters person, how it acts, what it likes and so on. And most important, in which city do the character live?

Please add the information of the characters to this talkpage or to my "Main" talkpage. -Goblin lair 19:49, 7 november 2008